Film review!

 Although we don't have all of our film finished, we are doing a film review. We still have to touch up the title sequence scenes. And we still have to add music and the words that go in the title sequence. We sent the film and pitch to parker siena and violets soccer coach. We chose her because we didn't want to choose our parents or friends who might hold back on critiquing us. Coach Jamie is very honest and will tell us the truth. We emailed her what we had so far. She said she liked the idea and with the music it will look better. One thing she pointed out was the lighting. the lighting in the walking scene and title sequence was good. The scenes where the girls are inside watching the news is too dark. It was filmed at my house and the furniture is dark brown and on top of that it was not very sunny out. somehow we didn't notice how dark it actually was. Im glad she said something about that because i wouldn't have noticed. We read what she had said and agreed. this meant we would have to film that scene again. Since it is almost due, we decided to come to my house after school tomorrow. it will still be sunny out so that fixes one problem. we will have to turn on another light. we can also take the videos we film and edit them in photos with the exposure and brightness. What she said was very useful and i'm glad we chose her.